Thats a pretty cool synth
Not sure what that synth is, but its pretty cool.
To keep this one simple, it needs a bassline, and some good effects (ie compression yet again)
If you intend to focus on technoish stuff, the limiter/compressor will be your main whore dude. Dont abuse it, but learn how to use it in collab with other effects and you'll be good.
Yep, i made all of these before i even really knew what a kompressor was, but now that ive been told numerous times to play with it i think ill go ahead do that, i'll most likely try to make a new short using some of the advise i've been given so far! well, after i go buy the ballad of gay tony for gta 4 ha. and yes i will be fokusing on tekno, the only other thing i ever did was D&B like 4 months ago, id gladly let you take a stab at listening to it, so long as i kan upload it :D thanks for the review man.