respect
That was dope. LIked the flow and big words and such. lol very nice though how you put the lyrics together has my head spinnin 5/5 10/10
Beat: "Dead End" by Fayde http://poyzenjam.newgroun ds.com/
Vocabulary: Myself
Threw sum lyrics I wrote for another of Fayde's beats on this one. Decided to chalk up the old wann cuz i didn't wanna do a full song, just a rant i guess. lol
have fun
(edit- trimmed up sum hedges)
(Poetry) bout my
1/I chop crops like a head shops backroom vendor
Clipped two out can't feel my sensors
Mentors taught me i should frequently drink
Im awakein at mid mornin just to puke in the sink
5/I think a peanut butter sandwich after smokey and the bandit
I speak upon the answers to exams, you better cram it
Gambit/ran until I couldn't feel my soul fly
Still i am conceptualy kamakazie drone like
9/SO I, spit mine while holdin my nuts
High like shelves, just to show I can't be touched
I won't budge to fit a mold or a meld
i'm more diseased the even deeper you delv, I need the speakers to tell
13/I reak of reefer and I constantly yell
my constipated thoughts have finaly got a chance to excell
So don't dwell keep it movein through th tough and the sad
I had to hold my head higher when I went through the bad
17/With nuthin to ask, no question for the man in the mask
That hides behind his lime light with life that travels too fast
I'm clutchin my flask, Swingin with it if i'm ever feelinin out matched
But thats never, so I drink till I crash
21/So smashed after nights at the bar
I thought I'd cut my fuckin hand off while splittin cigars
And so I sit down all shitty while I write up some bars
Then everbody and they sister sayin how I go hard, it's so bizzarre
(Blahzeblahzebigheadbasta rd)
25/I don't think I just act upon the action that stands
im instinctivly moribid thinkin on the glass in my hand
Exacerbated toward the lucrative but feasible plan
I elevate the situation with a hightend demand
29/For bombs blood gore and plus for your memorial stand
You haven't seen the dark side you are but startin to glance
With nuthin to chance I get into the punctureing stance
I'ma assumeing you're all for me with that mic in your hand
33/Malforming from the ready made and usual norm
but similar to crack babbies because i'm known to deform
contort and twist at the junction like an eliptical funtion
I'm needin no introduction when spittin sensible forms
37/I need a thorough examine, for flippin constant like an upstream samon
I get to rappin you like "Stop it gawdamnit"
I spout words from a deep ass pool And keep that tool,
40/ I'll never see famine and You can bet that fool
respect
That was dope. LIked the flow and big words and such. lol very nice though how you put the lyrics together has my head spinnin 5/5 10/10
Haha, thanx man
realism's finest
"I won't budge to fit a mold or a meld
i'm more diseased the even deeper you delv, I need the speakers to tell"
^^This is called keepin it true. This whole track is amazing. I love the imagery and PROPER use of multisyllabic words.
Another fav line:
"I thought I'd cut my fuckin hand off while splittin cigars
And so I sit down all shitty while I write up some bars"
YES
Thanx dude, I'm glad people on here appreciate poetic shyte
Beats Illin
Sick beat, but the rhymes are just ok. Your lyrics are pretty good but your flow needs some work. You should also record it all in one shot. good job i guess
thanx i guess...http://poyzenjam.newgrounds.c om/ <-the beat and many more of his can be found here
Dude...
where do you come from, this mastery of language is definitely not from a human brain. I'm in awe. Have you already pre-ordered 2010?
Nah dude, I'm just puttin jack moves on anyone that leave the store with it
damn....
why are you improving so much?
Cuz I just feel like, 2010 is gonna be my year
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.