Well

This song is somehow familiar to me , as if i already heard it!
Anyhow thanx to theblackhawk i found this masterpice!
It has good chours , trancy melodie , nothing is wrong , very thin !
Great job man !
You can try my stuff out ! :-)

you asked for a review....

youll get one hell of a long one.

nice notes choices, the pluck synth works well, and the chords could have been a little more solid if you know what i mean.
The kick was nice and bassy, but there wasn't any real Treble to kick it a 'click' sound. You know what im talkin about if u listen to my songs.
u need an open hi hat man.
The closed hat just doesnt cut it. i like the chords that u add in the chorus tho.
i see that you tried the $/4 time ride thingy, it works well, but the ride needs to be a little dirtier.
remember, if the ride sounds bad in your ears, just try it. it makes it that much fuller.

To make the song more fuller, id start the song with a nice solid trance arp.
Then you have the first chorus and drums fade in, and the drum roll that follows has a bunch of single kicks. Then you have a kick/tom roll, then have a boom, kick then a 4/4 main chorus kick in.
Then the chorus should be nice and fullfilling at the beat break in.

now, i have let it loop 3 or 4 times now, and i am convinced that i need to try and do something with this song.
now, if you willing, could you e-mail the .flp file of this to jadanpaluck@msn.com?
then ill post it on newgrounds as a remake..and ill give you full credit.

thanks!

theblackhawk--_--
im rootin 4 ya!