great work first off.
Dont do that with basslines. basslines should not move on each note. it kinda gives it a very 'uneven' look at things.
as i listen i almost say out out
you added a very nice, powerful trance arp. Nice little chorus thing you got goin on. remember that arp is there to make the song a lot more....grittier.
the arp is what puts the rave in trance. wait that didnt work...w/e but you get the picture
you se FL 5 right?
i know you do casue i heard the nice piano, and FL5 is the only FL so far to have a piano, so maybe you should try using the other pre-VSTs they give you.
like sytrus. thast one hell of a powerful lead man.
as mor the drums. Just grab some things that go click,tap,boom and a nice open hi hat, and nice solid kick and snare/clap, mix em together and there you go!
Dont...use loops. too many n00bs use loops on newgrounds...(im not calling you a n00b) i jst got really, REALLY sick of the loops that are premade in fruity loops.
yes it does sound good.
it fits very well...just its a little over used in my opinion.
instead of using loops, get some weaker versions of the drums that your using and make a 'loop' in that,(like you could have an awesome DNB loops goin that you made of course in the backround, and it could make it so damned solid man, id probably dance. and i dont dance. i usually hurt myself) then you have that goin with the beat.
it works so well man. u gotta try it.
ill be watching for one of your next songs.
Thanks again for the review blackhawk... This is actually very old, I made it along time before all of my other songs on NG. Thats why that drum loop is in there, lol, I never use premade loops or synth presets anymore. But if theres one thing I suck at in FL, its making drumloops. I can never seem to get it right. Oh well, practice makes perfect. Thanks again.