Very nice.

I gave a 10 for originality because the intro was unique, as well as the classical piano towards the end of the song. absolutely gorgeous.
I gave a 9 in diversity because it had the unique quality with the same thumping trance beat.
I gave an 8 in clarity because i was kind of hard to hear at points, it was very rough in places, but barable.
i gave a 10 in effot because you'd HAVE to have worked hard in order to make this. Great, great work.

Keep it up, and check out my stuff as well.

- Johnny_Beat

Genius... Plain Genius

As one of the writers of this song, I claim it genius. And, I hope it influences others out there. Great, great job on finishing it up Tehmalakai, wonderful... WONDERFUL!

Check out my stuff, and tehmalakai's!

hm

SEND ME THIS

NOW

lol jk

now, really im more than willing to remake it. remakes only take me 20 minutes at the longest.
Any ways

Great string work. but i wuld lose the MIDI strings that you used....it gives it a final fantasy feel to it. that can be good or bad.
the piano part(skipping ahead in the song) was genius man. It was midi too, but wow, it was completely amazing. even though i would have thrown in a nice DNB beat half way in the piano riff, it was still amazing.

i see that you are trying to copy my kick. lolz well for a little advice...
the volume is nice, but remember, if your gonna use my style of kick, you cant have a compressor. that will make it OD(like i heard a few times) due to the volume. and the compressor will try to hoold the volume back and package it up, but it dont work too great.
if the little bar thingy goes red its not the end of the world.
actually mine is stuck up there during choruses and melodies O_O
AND NO FAST DIST ON THE KICK

that gave a soft song a rave feel.
WRONG
bad.
it didnt ruin the song, but it...didnt fit.
keep that in mind. only use fast dist on the kick if its rave.

now....if you e-mail this masterpiece to me to remix it...
Ill e-mail the instruents i use in my kick.

maybe that'll make you send it to me

hehehehe

theblackhawk--_--
keep on makin music!