{B.A.B.} The Fall of Eden


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06/21/2009 | 12:59PM EDT

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Classical Loop | 4.2 MB | 1 min 52 sec

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Author Comments

"You can hardly see a thing, save for the flickering light from the flames outside of your hiding place. Everyone that you knew is likely dead. Or worse. And you likely will suffer the same fate as the forces that destroyed your village finally find you hiding in the last standing building in that village. Your last hope is to run, and that's exactly what you do. You run faster than you've ever run in your life, knowing that it's pointless.

"They pursue you, shooting unknown projectiles at you and cursing in their incomprehensible language when they miss. You get to the edge of town and finally begin to hope again when you're struck in the leg by one of the projectiles. The pain is blinding, and you collapse right there. Breathing raggedly, you look at your useless leg.

"The projectile looks like a spike with barbs running along its length. You see that the barbs completely shredded the impact area. But you're not worried about that right now. What you're worried about is the rapid approach of the monsters. All of your options are exhausted, and there's nothing that you can do to avoid your fate.

"One creature comes close, and you can see that it's more horrible than you could have ever imagined. Its eyes are sunken deep into its wolf-shaped head, with dozens of spikes protruding and hanging from its mane. Hundreds of razor-sharp and bloody teeth line its muscular jaw. Its arms, also covered in spikes, like hair, give way to deadly-looking talons, at least a foot long and terrifyingly sharp.

"It says something to another creature close by, and that creature nods its head. You try to crawl away, but both you and the creature recognize that the effort is futile. The last thing that you ever see is the creature raise one bloody claw above its head and swing down, aiming straight for your heart....."

This song is a reorchestration of a song I made a year ago, called Darkside, which can be found here: <http://www.newgrounds.co m/audio/listen/182834>. I did this song specifically for a flash game for the Power of Three. Hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed making it.

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Average Score: 9.9 / 10

Score: 10
wrath222

"mannnn."

date: July 12, 2009

like wow nice job that ultamate totaly cool completely amasing but try amping up the bass alittle more increasing the effects of running and all but all in all purfect cant w8 till you make another...

July 12, 2009

Author's Response:

Yeah, I realized the bass was too low after I rendered it and closed the project.

I'm not sure what you mean by "effects of running". Could you clarify in a PM?

Thanks for the review though, I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully another song will be up in a week at the most, since I finally have free time to work on another classical piece.

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Score: 10
ChaosProdigy

"Flawless"

date: July 11, 2009

This piece is quite powerful, and its structure is clever and more innovative than any other classical song I've heard.

Your instruments combine to create this beautiful, mysterious song with clarity. The percussion is executed well, and the strings were a little weak, but were stellar nonetheless. What hit me hard, in a good way, were the keyed and woodwind instruments. They have the spotlight in this piece in my opinion.

What mesmerizes me is that this is a loop---a seamless loop. And not only is it that, it's a loop with great structure and integrity.

5/5 and 10/10!!!

Keep up the great work!!!!

July 11, 2009

Author's Response:

The anomalies with the string are most likely due to the fact that during the recomposition of this song from its earlier version, I attempted to change akk the synths in the original to their most similar acoustic counterparts. Some synths were hard to emulate though, and the result was, well, you can kind of tell hahahaha

Thanks for the amazing compliments though, I didn't expect this song to recieve the reception that it did, especially since the ending turned out much weaker than I intended. If you wanna see why, check out the original version. The power in the last section was amazing in that version.

I'm surprised that your favorite portions of the song involved the woodwind and the keyed instruments, especially since I only used a flute, a piano, and an organ from those two families.

Thanks again, this review, as well as the others, made me feel good. Honestly.

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Score: 10
Gravey

"Awesome..."

by: Gravey
date: July 4, 2009

...as always. :-P

I've got a headache, so this will be a short review. To be honest though, what do I say really? You have a great grasp on writing, and really do a great job at creating the perfect atmosphere in your pieces.

The mesh of instruments is really well done. I still can't figure out how you get everything to sound so clear and precise. I can write, but I can't get a professional sound out of my sound fonts for anything. You though my friend, seems to excel at it like no other.

I love the the fluidity of this piece. It really interweaves itself around itself. I'm not sure that makes sense, but this seems to be like smoke and it simply flows around itself. It is solid, yet ethereal, tangible, yet untouchable. Simply wonderful work here.

5/5 and 10/10 overall! This has been favorited!

-Gravey-

July 5, 2009

Author's Response:

I usually try to layer my instruments in order to create a more unique sound while also masking any bad sample elements. I also eq everything below and above the main signal to the lowest point possible, while moderating the rest. I EQ every instrument that sounds a bit beneath par.

As for reverb, I keep all instruments under the same reverb settings, so that each instrument sounds like it belongs with the other. All the volume envelopes are edited while the reverb is still active, so that no instruments sounds like it's ending too soon.

I try to make sure that the amount of instruments playing on one side of the stereo field equals the other, or is at least close. As a result, many of the instruments are separated.

I also try to separate the melodies, make sure that an instrument playing one melody isn't on the same octave as another playing a different melody.

That pretty much sums up the ways that I keep everything clear.

The fluidity of this piece is actually a weird effect of the samples I chose for this piece. Since I used a lot of section instruments, which have a slow release time, the piece seemed to swim, adding to the mystery effect that linkcrazy cited below.

Thanks for enjoying, man. That's all I really ask for. Thanks ;)

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Score: 9
linkcrazy101

"Sounds....more mysterious than powerful."

date: July 4, 2009

I would expect to find this in something like lord of the rings or some horror movie. I love the excecution in this one. Everything is nice and light and I really like your timpani samples. Percussion sounds like it comes out of a real orchestra. If you need good string samples, please see me. I have good string soundfonts (sort of like squidfont). The strings sound just a little too midi, but don't fret. On my rock song I made with my friend, we preffered the drumset in midi than using a soundfont. My only complaint about the piano is that there is barely any reverb. I don't know what it is, flute or what, and I believe you are using anttu brass samples (very good). Overall, this piece, I could see in a movie or video game. I think this one of your best orchestral pieces.

July 5, 2009

Author's Response:

It's funny, the original to this song was actually pretty synthy. It was actually pretty hard to find acoustic instruments that sounded similar to the synths I used.

I would like to see these string soundfonts, I can add them to the library. I already have an idea how I would use them.

I hadn't even noticed the piano problem while I was composing this. I don't know how I could have missed this. Oh well, too late now hahaha

Actually, I hadn't even heard of anttu before now. I gotta check them out too.

Thanks for the compliments and the critique, I really appreciate it. Send me a PM about the string SFs.

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Score: 10
SessileNomad

"name is amazing"

date: June 22, 2009

good name man

dude this is really good, the story along with it is perfect, i cant think of anything better

good snare stuff, usually your volume on them is not to great, but there good this time around

whoa holly crap i didnt even realized it looped so perfectly, this is like my 5th time listening now, and its not repetitive, great job with that

i liked the organ, but i wish it had more punch to it, a more dramatic feel, ya know?

other than that, this track was REALLY good

more tracks like this plis

How the hell did you get it to loop so good, most loops i hear have like a 1 second glitch b4 they restart. this was perfect though..

great track man

peace out

SessileNomad

June 22, 2009

Author's Response:

Well, most MP3s suck for looping anyways, I wasn't really worried about perfecting the loop too much. Personally, I just make sure there's some kind of effect at the beginning to keep people from noticing that it just looped. On a few songs, I used a cymbal roll that began at the end of the song and finished on the other side.

I was actually worried that the end of this track wouldn't sound dramatic enough, and I definitely know that the original has a much more dramatic sound at the finish.

I wish I had a different organ to choose from, but unfortunately that's the best organ sampleset that I have right now.

Thanks for the review, and thanks for the good comments about the drums especially cuz that means I'm finally doing something right hahahaha

And I have to say, it took me a good 20 minutes to finally think of this name :P

Oh and I just remembered, the loop might have been helped by the impulse reverb, which causes a ton of latency. If you notice, the actual beginning of the song starts at the last beat before it's supposed to because of the latency.

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