next time do a real song

I t is good, but good as can be a 30 seconds good fuck, got my point?

Honestly?

Try actually making a song next time

zeros

Unintelligible noise!

I am sure that this piece has more meaning than it did for me, at least I am hoping. It is no doubt an original effort, but where I can understand the hard to grasp lyrics of "growl bands" and "screamers", yours I cannot. Keep up your creativity though. I am sure you'll find something awesome for us soon enough.