before one can experiment they must be able to identify the elements they are experimenting with. Simple things like tempo, rhythm .
just label it as it is, some kid spazzing out on a microphone, you will get much more respect than your act of being pretentious
I always wanted to make a beat with my voice but it looks like you beat me to it lol. Pretty cool song im rating it 5/5.
If you have any spare time check out my music ya?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.