Interesting, and unique
I believe that this is the first time that I have heard something like this before. However, as my suggestion, add in the timer running out part and the dying part.
Never been a big fan of Mario, but this tops it. You had fun with this, huh?
duh duh duh duh duh DUHM. XD
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.