Score: 6
"More work and it'll be nice"
date: November 3, 2009
I don't know why you keep deleting my reviews, I'm only trying to help.
This song needs a lot of work. It's far too slow, and needs more speed for a better interpretation. There is no beat, and little to no bottom end so you need to add bass to balance your lead melodies. I try to help you and all you do is "oh noes, somebody didn't vote 10 so it must be abusive". Sorry buddy but if you can't handle constructive criticism you won't make it in the real world.
The pounding on the drum towards the middle is more distracting than it is adding to song, so a more consistent beat would be better. Using a distorted guitar is also not that effective considering the mood of the song, it's too modern. Using strings or a nice synth pad would be just as dramatic but far more suiting to the song, especially with the strings building up to the climax and the flute at the end, electric distorted guitar just seems out of place.
There is nothing abusive about this review. I am helping the best way I can. Marking it for deletion just for giving constructive criticism is corrupt.
November 3, 2009
Author's Response:
Marry me.