Poetry

Both the song and the poem that is, together, are true poetry.

That poem..I love the cadence to it, goes perfectly with the song...it took me a minute (as I was reading it when the song opened) to realize that what I was singing was not the melody :).

I think it is.

This is very good overall, I cannot wait to listen to future music from you, when you get a bit more expirimental that is to say :).

My only points of criticism are the very things that I struggle with:
1)Some transitions are a tad rough (3:20). I see how you tried to smooth it out, but the low string (cello? Bass?) seemed to pop out a bit too much on it's first note.

2) You could still find higher quality soundfonts :P, but that is not a criticism so much as a suggestion.

I like the celestia at the end by the way.

I'll be listening,
~TheWisestMagi

Very nice!

The first half was very calming, and I like the change at 2:25.

OMG

Love it, man! Its so good in soft!