Like the sounds but...

I like the sounds of, but you didn't use transitions to next part of the song.

MAKE AN EFFORT!

where was the beat!????!? at first it sounded as if it mite have gotten better, but it was so repetative, all the same. it was so tedius, sorry m8, all the best.

Yes,but

you need to get some more melodies because:you used them in two songs ,and if youre not going to be more original,people will think that youre music sucks.
yours truly,MercyClock
ps go check out my music