good

a lil sparitic but overall it was good i like the sound and feel but it is only one demention it needs more

No Effort

When i started this song i was like... ok... This COULD get good. It didnt. An iritating fl bass cam in. Adn than a highpitched kick came in. It was iritating. I can hear how many instruments you had you had.
1. background synth
2. one other synth
3. bass
4. drum
5. the fading thingy
thats all.
Listen. Originality is bad. Theres so much junk on ng. Diversity is bad, all the same, iritating and fucked up. Clarity was shit. But worst was your effort. THIS IS JUNK. Get talent or practise fruity loops. get some own samples or whatever. But dont post shit on ng. I hope you will ever get good so you can have fun making music, while other enjoy it. Dont think "hes a fucking bastard" because im not. Im just giving you a hint. For example. techno is more than synthy sounds. You need a good drum which brings you into a trance. effects, reverbs. Really, learn from this review. Try to record things put em into your song. I dont want the audio portal to die:'(. But one the other site... i dont really care, i will not come here a lot anymore though. Well good day