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Burj Dubai

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Author Comments

I'm very proud of this, and I hope you enjoy.

Hardware: Guitar, Bass, Piano, Drum Machine, Synth
Software: Synths

Thanks for listening.

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sarias

2008-06-24 06:05:57

I believe

That its interesting yes but i think the music just goes all over the place, the mixing is good, and its a good start, but i think that it needs more direction, music is supposed to tell a story. Other then that i liked the style reminded me of kinda final fantasy 7 ish i suppose, or somthing ps1 ish idk but yeah for this I think the melody needs more direction cause its just kinda repetitive, i mean yeah i know you told me my bass was repetative, but if you notice my melody moves, where as your meldoy is kinda repative. I look forward to hearing more from you

kevs91 responds:

Well, I think you do have a point with the more direction comment. I do try to tell a story, or convey an emotion, here- but I'm also trying to do it within a pop song format. Which I should probably just ditch, but there you go. I'll definitely work on making it less repetitive, too.

Thanks for the helpful comments.

JJDaminator

2008-06-23 21:37:35

pretty good

i think it's a nice little tune but i feel that it needs a little more kick. you know something to make the listener jump. i guess you can say its a little dry, but don't get me wrong this song is pretty good, just put some more effort and would be perfect.

kevs91 responds:

Thanks for the review.