Score: 10

"They are stalking you"

by: PIEMANwantsaMUNKEY

date: October 14, 2009

A office worker, he hated his job but he got payed 50 every week. He was doing his work when suddenly he saw another worker rip up his paper. He was barely fierce of anything so he wouldnt be so scared of what happens. Not even a spider crawling up him. The worker turned to him and pointed. Then he had a vision of the worker jumping out the window. He went to get some coffee. He saw the tv and the creepiest song he had ever heard in reverse was on. He was pretty wierded out, not scared though. He tripped as if something made him. He turned around and he saw a dead body gurgling blood. He wasnt scared yet, but he looked out the window. He saw a machete carrying freak walk in. He heard tons of screams. He thought that he was next, but he took the elevator down to run and get his wife. To leave. 3 Loud bump's stopped the elevator. The power was out too. He said " What the heck is going on?!" a machete popped out of the door. He jumped back in shock. He grabbed the machete and tried to pull it. It ripped his hand's when it pulled back. The machete suddenly started cutting the door open. His hands were ripped up so he couldnt punch (suck's because he could knock anything back with a push or punch) The elevator door opened and he saw a bloody dripping freak. A bloody outfit, blood dripping from its mouth and it looked like it had been cut opened. It walked twoard it and stabbed him through the wall. He gurgled blood and fell. The mysteriouse butcher put something in his cut. Some type of silcer liquid. He got back up later to haunt more pedestrians. He went outside and leaped twoard a man. He pinned him to the ground and ripped his insides out. The butcher also put the liquid in the mans nails. So the world is filled with brutal homicidals. The end.

Score: 10

"WOW"

by: killerman170

date: July 27, 2009

Im Impressed With All Your Songs Man You May Officially Count Me Count Me As A Super Fan

Score: 10

"WOW AWESOME!!!!!"

by: Naruto700

date: July 7, 2009

Hey punk7890,i decided to go to your userpage and the songs you made ARE AWESOME DUDE!!!!!!WOW Im really impressed,this song too.this song just scares me even more than "dawn of a new hour"icant wait to hear all your other songs,wow i love your music dude,KEEP IT UP =D =D =D =D =D

Score: 10

"I like it!"

by: zerohero1

date: June 15, 2009

To me personally, It gives me a eerie feeling. And it fills me with chills. Sorta sounds satanic. I love it! Very creepy..., It would be perfect in a horror movie or in one of those short films where they talk about a haunted house or something.

10/10

Score: 10

"Another haunting melody --Hell yeah"

by: Scrap-Metal

date: June 9, 2009

It really does set a mood for being lost. Reminds me of a dream I had.

Nah, I'm not gonna post another huge ass comment like I did on Desert Dream :)