Here I go again
1: i don't think the instruments really fit the melody Take the time to try lots of different ones for every song
2: The siren effect at 2:23 Doesn't really fit in to the song
3: the kick needs some effects to it it sounds kinda Plain
4: its very repetitive add some variations
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1: The Main melody Is very Well done
2: The vox are good the bring every song to a new level
Good work
XenoxX