umph umph
im a big fan of techno and this is GREAT i really like it i also agree with whats-his-face about the volume thing but you dont even need to change that completely just dont take it too far down maybe try some drums
i like drums
lol
peace
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Just a nice 'ol techno song... enjoy, rate, review. ask me to review yours! :)
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Sanryd responds:
Thanks for the review... lol, didn't notice it for a while... i have like 40 songs.... sorry. Much appreciated though. :)
wow
this is your best song yet... i agree with what xenoxx said.... but still... very entertaining.. your melodies rock.
Sanryd responds:
Thanks, I really try hard to do good melodies and good intros. Check out my new song Superhero... i feel its a better song than this one.
Aiyo...
Pretty decent, got me tapping my fingers, hooray. something you can really dance to if had a little more to it. Get some spice in there, it needs some variation from 'verse' to 'verse.' flows well, though.
lol you want to review one of mine? Take a listen to, 'aliens on the blipside' then.
:D best wishes, and keep rawking!
Sanryd responds:
Thanks! I will check out your stuff for sure, and leave a review. Like i said to xenoxx below, i'm definitely going to be working on this song to make it more enjoyable... i appreciate the input.
Wow
This is a lot better then the last song of yours I reviewed
I have 2 things to say
1: the noise at :52 should just be taking out no offense but yeah
2: This song has a LOAD of potential Just the drums need some serious work get a new kick and a new bass
ok 3 things: The song needs more variation its pretty much the same threw out the whole song
OK 4: At 1:26 when you lower the volume I think that should just not happen its not very effective...
Well thats it for the bad Now for the good
1: The main melody is probably one of the best I have EVER heard
2: The intro was really Well done as well
Good work Send me a Pm if you decide to redo it and when its done.
XenoxX
Sanryd responds:
wow, thanks for the extensive review. The points you brought up are great, i think i will try to redo this. Like i've told other people i did this in 2 hours. I really appreciate what you said. So give me a week or so to fine tune it now. I think i'll go check to see if you have some stuff i'd like, you seem to know how to make a good song from your comments. Being new to this, hearing reviews helps... i wish i could have someone telling me these things while i'm writing songs.
Good stuff.
All the instrument parts fit really well... and you got me at 1:30 :)
The only complaint I have is that it ended too quickly. It sounded like it was leading into something and I was waiting for it but it never happened. Oh well, I still gave 'er a 5. Nice work!
Sanryd responds:
Thanks. This song is getting some of the best reviews I've had. To be honest i made this in an afternoon for about 2 hours worth of work. I just didn't even see that it could go any further. But ya, since you said something... i'm having ideas! PM me if you have ideas too, because that would make my creative job alot easier... :) ... and thanks again for reviewing, they are so few and far between.
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