This is a lot better then the last song of yours I reviewed
I have 2 things to say
1: the noise at :52 should just be taking out no offense but yeah
2: This song has a LOAD of potential Just the drums need some serious work get a new kick and a new bass
ok 3 things: The song needs more variation its pretty much the same threw out the whole song
OK 4: At 1:26 when you lower the volume I think that should just not happen its not very effective...
Well thats it for the bad Now for the good
1: The main melody is probably one of the best I have EVER heard
2: The intro was really Well done as well
Good work Send me a Pm if you decide to redo it and when its done.