Quite good

I love the idea. The hair could do with being less rigid looking as well as the fact that it all stops at the same length, which would not happen. The face also looks slightly lobsided with an awfully pointy chin.

All in all, though. I really quite like this :) Keep up the good work!

Quite beautiful

Really like this--makes me feel relaxed and happy. I don't know if you did this on purpose, but I like how she isn't perfectly beautiful--her face is kind of wide, her hair slightly messy. It makes this picture much more unique and touching. If you'd like any suggestions, it would look great if you drew it from a different angle, such as looking up towards the girl, through someone's eyes, or as a close-up. Also, while the front of her hair is beautifully done, the back looks stiff and detached. Anyway, that's just an opinion from someone who can't draw well, but likes looking at art.