Quite beautiful
Really like this--makes me feel relaxed and happy. I don't know if you did this on purpose, but I like how she isn't perfectly beautiful--her face is kind of wide, her hair slightly messy. It makes this picture much more unique and touching. If you'd like any suggestions, it would look great if you drew it from a different angle, such as looking up towards the girl, through someone's eyes, or as a close-up. Also, while the front of her hair is beautifully done, the back looks stiff and detached. Anyway, that's just an opinion from someone who can't draw well, but likes looking at art.