I think the title is setting you up for angry comments. its a good picture though. your color pallet is accurate and the clouds in the backround fit the animation of the show. But Asuna's (the girl) facial proportions are a bit off and her finger are weird. its all I can see now. Kirito's (the boy) swords handle looks too long. as for the title being a pun, "My Art Online" would have worked better to your theme. Its your picture and you don't have to re-title it but like I said, your inviting the haters and that's whats going to dominate the comments instead of constructive reviews.