Not Too Shabby
I think this is a GREAT use of file space for all that's in this piece. To me, economy of file space is just as important in rating a Flash animator as the actual content. In that aspect, you rule!
Though a bit poorly paced, the story is interesting enough to warrant checking out Episode 2. Though it'll affect the overall file size, put more work into the action sequences. As they are now, they don't evoke the tension or excitement that fight scenes should deliver. If you have to voice your next installment, try harder at making your voice sound different for various characters and don't be afraid to go over the top, especially when characters are supposed to be shouting.
The music worked EXTREMELY well with the mood of the piece and the opening sequence was VERY cool. Bottom line - the file size is impressive as is the music and the opening sequence. This entry is good as it is, but will benefit greatly from a well paced script, more interesting action sequences and voice actors. Best of luck with the series! I look forward to seeing you improve!