Good First Attempt at an Art Show.
We don't get too many of those on Newgrounds. Mostly when I see them, it's either just a single picture someone uploaded (not worth it), or a brief slideshow which gives you nothing interesting to watch. Reddclaw already gave you what I feel are the best suggestions you could receive. I honestly don't know if this particular work is going to be able to stick around long enough for you to update it, but I'm also hoping it will. Please do fix the bug so that we all know that when Cloud's hair goes black and changes style it's now Zack. I wasn't able to pick that up until I checked to see what kind of comments you'd gotten (and what information might be in your responses). I don't think you need to do anything hentai - that really doesn't do anything to improve the quality of the subject - but you do need to fix the proportions. That's always been my biggest problem with my hand-drawn cartoons I do to share with my friends, so I feel your pain. Choosing to do the noses in the style of Akira Toriama (sp?) was interesting, I don't know if it fits the style of the Final Fantasy series (although it does lean towards little or no noses). Oh well, it can be hard to get everything to look exactly the way you want it to, and don't feel too bad if and when people make ignorant comments about it. Just keep Reddclaw's suggestions in mind and update your work and it should be a fine addition to the Final Fantasy collection. Adding the villains and perhaps alternating between the heroes and villains would be really cool, especially if the transitions give a real sense of conflict between the characters. My vote for a villain to be added (since we've all got one): Rufus. I always thought he was rather slick.