A monstrous prologue
Wow, I have alot to say on this movie. First off, I'd like to say that the style is original and it works very, very well. Watching the characters come alive was fun. But there are two major, huge mistakes in this movie that made it almost unbearable for me: the prologue and then the dialogue.
First of all, the prologue was unforgivably long and boring. By the time the prologue was over I was almost done watching the movie. The language you used during the prologue did not deserve to be in a movie that used such original animation style. I have so many horrible things to say about the prologue but I'll avoid it. It's just too bad the to appreciate the movie you have to watch the prologue but it's almost impossible to appreciate the movie if you do watch the prologue.
Second of all, the dialogue. The dialogue is also the same dillemna as is the prologue, because you wrote the dialogue and the prologue. The swearing, tone, and language of the writing in this movie is generic and stupid. Calling zombies 'fuckheads' is so stupid and ameturish I laughed, which is why this movie got a two for humor. The writing desperatly needs work if you are going to use speech bubbles for the rest of the series.
Other then those two things, I was impressed. I enojyed watching the characters move and be put into situations, and the zombie scene was excellent. This movie could have easily been an overall nine or ten if it wasn't for the two blistering mistakes made. I hope they aren't made again in the sequel, which I think I'm looking forward to seeing.
SadBoyMcGee