w00t!
I'll be keeping my eye on this one. The prologue was intriguing, and everything about the story is suspenseful and engrossing (as far as Flash cartoons go). The only things that I didn't like were that there were no buttons during the prologue to allow for users to proceed with the story at their own pace. And (this can be considered an artistic critique and thus, not worth taking to heart, but I'll say it anyway) I didn't particularly like hearing the two protagonists talk to each other. I think it'd be a lot cooler and much creepier if they just sort of communicated via physical gestures. Anyhow, this is a really awesome story you're creating here.