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Reviews for "Corkscrew - Hazard"

I like it. You can hear it is very considered; lots going on and lots of interest for the ears. Mix sounds good to me. Well done.
Px

ItzCorkscrew responds:

Thank you very much :)))

I love harsh riffs

This is dope:) like the energy

Not much to say besides it could use more low end overall

Keep it up

ItzCorkscrew responds:

thank you! :)

From a technical standpoint, I think the overall volume of this piece could be louder. The compression and sound of the song is fine, it's just the peaks are quieter than what I think would be ideal.

I'm wondering about what you were thinking going into this song. What was your thought process? Putting that in your description would help me give more helpful feedback based on how well I thought your intent came through (rather than just by my own taste), as well as a potentially more accurate rating.

One example of something to consider is the title. I'm curious, why call it "Hazard"? Also, it's not clear to me what your piece's thumbnail artwork has to do with the song itself.

I hope this helps. :)

More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806

ItzCorkscrew responds:

Hi there, thank you for this very long review, I love them!

I don't know myself what I was thinking when I was producing this, just because I always decide in the moment what to do. I do a lot of tries, and then I continue to change it until it sounds good. I tried a lot of time to follow some schemes but it always ended up in melodic songs and/or boring songs and/or banal songs.

The title has been chosen casually, I thought it sounded good with the song so I decided to name it like that.

Thank you so much for the technical advice too, I'll keep that in mind!
Cheers :)

The song is good but I hate that the volume is the same in the whole song xD

ItzCorkscrew responds:

I know right, I will improve that in the future!