ok...
This movie was suprisingly dull. It lacked to many of the things that make movies exiting. The graphics looked like they were drawn by a 5 year old. Voice acting would have been a major plus to this movie because it mostly talk, and not so much action. You should have spent more time on this one.
It's okay...
The only advice I can give to you is to start playing with the vector capabilities of flash. Just do line to line art and then band as needed. The only problem with your movie is the graphics. Ohterwise everything seems to be pretty cool. The music was pretty damned good overall. It's just that the graphics make it hard to sit through. Practice tracing jpg's or somethign to get the hang of vector based illustration before you do another sequel or invest anymore time into this endeavor. It doesn't take long to get the hang of it and worst case scenario, you can always take photos of friends in poses and trace over those. It would MASSIVELY improve your vids man... I mean think about it for a second, if there is NO interactivity, NO voice-over audio or anything AND it doesn't visually attract people you're possibly going to get blammed... Just some constructive critisism though mind you...
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target: Humanity... ROCK ON! hehe... your story is a bit disjointed; almost like you came up with it in a hurry and crammed it all in before you could change your mind, but it's pretty neat-o. I was waiting for that engineer to say, "Don't worry ma'am, i know what i'm doing... Hey wait a minute... oh fuck... RUN GUYS!"
ok I guess
I mean i couldnt do any better but there are alot of people who could.
ok
I would recomend some real voices and some sound effects. The lack of sound makes it a little harder to pay attention. The graphics are ok but i would focus mainly on more sound.