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Reviews for "Dear Edmund"
This is a very promising game, I've read some of the reviews you responded to and it seems like there is room for improvement.
A recommendation I have is a longer street with people you could talk to which could give you an idea of how much health and DAC approval the street has (Health and approval would not be displayed on UI), and maybe instead of buying health at Junior's there could be a homeless guy ya give money to for it. Also the carriage that takes ya ta work could be right in front of your house.
The house feels empty. Bed, lamps, door, and occasionally a letter are the only interactable objects. Maybe at work you could ask a person to stay over at your house for a visit or over night, DAC members would only come if you had luxury furniture.
Keep this game alive, I really think it has potential!
MindTheGrease responds:
Thank you for your feedback. Perhaps the carriage being outside of the house could be a purchased luxury? - I also like the homeless man idea, thanks :)
Excellent for a demo! Common story of a new employee under a corrupt government who has an opportunity to make a difference. Interesting to have two different types of income (Personal and city) and different things to do with them. I don't have anything constructive yet, looking forward to future versions.
its true hi edmud
very long and high quality for a demo, good show, if I ever add money to my steam I'll be sure to buy this one