Real fun toon dodging every instinct and cliche throughline
Reviews for "The Chipfork Murders"
it's pretty good
Wow nice
This one has a good lil story here but the characters really jump out at you on this I liked it from the start you really bring some talent to the front of the table good effort here and I found some parts even better then others, great depth of characters and the story here
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Too long and didn't even have a conclusion. Would be better if the characters acted less dumb, would make the pace much faster and more interesting