I liked it.
It was a bit bland imo--the drums could've had more variation, the ending was just a *little* anticlimactic, and it would'a been nice if after the Brokenness faded out and came back it switched to a heavier drumline (distorted, perhaps). Sort of like the tune coming back with a vengeance. But aside from that, 'twas good and didn't abuse the usual chords that I could see. I can see it being used to great effect in a sidescroller or platformer or something with ghosts or something harrying the player.
... But that's just me. Not absolutelyspiffingawesome yet, but definately on the way. :D Keep it up.