((( COOL )))
Ok well notbad work it was decent in animation, the story seemed to slowdown abit but it was ok, the voices were good, but could be sharpened up abit, anyways nice work...
~X~
((( COOL )))
Ok well notbad work it was decent in animation, the story seemed to slowdown abit but it was ok, the voices were good, but could be sharpened up abit, anyways nice work...
~X~
Not interesting enough
Add why he goes back to AA! have him get into a bar fight, or drive drunk, or SOMETHING. It's just not very interesting.
fine fine fine
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You need to add more to it. I agree with the reviewer before me...
I'm in the process of added some bg music and an alternite ending.
Decent.
This isn't that bad of an idea, it's not particularly great to watch, but at least it had some sort of plot.
The voices weren't too bad, but it could have used a few more sound effects in various places.
It's a bit short as well, but it's not too bad.
Enjoyable at best.
OK cartoon
Not a bad idea, not particularly entertaining but at least it had some sort of a plotline, a preloader and sound. Voices weren't too bad, could have used a few more sound effects here and there. A bit short as well, but it's not a bad effort.