The Hell?
That wasn't really good at all. There wasn't really any humor in it, and no music. Doesn't even have to be Singing music, just some nice background music that would fit in with it would work.
Advice: Try and learn how to Syncronize voices and mouths. It would add a great deal of goodness to it. Once again, some Music would be nice. Also, Typos aren't your friend.
Sub-Sub-Par
OK, theres NO lip-sync, their mouth's don't even move, THEY hardly even move, I use Flash a bit too, and i can tell that this toon only took a maximum of 5 hours to make..... even if he was an amateur! to say the least.... I'm dissapointed, the sound was Ok, better than any of mine, but still, the lack of Lip-sync more than makes up for it in lousiness, Sorry for being so hard on you man but i think you could do better.
Decent.
This isn't that bad of an idea, it's not particularly great to watch, but at least it had some sort of plot.
The voices weren't too bad, but it could have used a few more sound effects in various places.
It's a bit short as well, but it's not too bad.
Enjoyable at best.
OK cartoon
Not a bad idea, not particularly entertaining but at least it had some sort of a plotline, a preloader and sound. Voices weren't too bad, could have used a few more sound effects here and there. A bit short as well, but it's not a bad effort.
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Ok well notbad work it was decent in animation, the story seemed to slowdown abit but it was ok, the voices were good, but could be sharpened up abit, anyways nice work...
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