Sounds cool. Has that emotional vibe to it like Jay Z Numb. Quite a heavy track and moving piece. The drums are decent and the piano is cool too. Would focus a bit on the mastering of the track itself. The mixdown seems decent but it feels like the whole track is behind a phat limiter stopping individual bits from really popping through.
Quite an ambient piece, even giving me some Silent Hill vibes with those pads, or like Jigsaw with that piano around 2:20. Interesting piece. Wonder what sort of vocals someone would fit over it.
Composition wise solid dude. Just doesn't quite pop through as much as it could.
Can almost hear Linking Park in my head "I've become so numb I can feel you here. .become so numb... " or whatever they are. Definitely fits the genre well.