You have potential but let it slip away...
You have potential but let it slip away, Great graphics and chance for a good story but it was way too corney and the animations were choppy. On your next movie stay away from cliches like "I'm your worst night-mare" and crap like that. Be original put time into story people are willing to wait for quality, dont just make something quick and half-assed.
Decent...1st was better
To tell the truth...it's nice, not sure what you guys are ranting about but it's perfect if your speakers are on high enough. I found it was sucky in the beginning, because the vampires just stood there...and talked...and got killed. I think they would've liked jumped her or something. This one was short...so didn't like that either, I'm hoping the next one will be better, keep up the work.
Wow
I love vampires,they are the best,I have so many movies and books with vampires,this is truly my favorite movie on the site,I haven't seen the first one yet but "The Swed" is saying it's much better so I'll take his word for it.
can't wait until the next!!!
the first was better but still
this was deffinetly one of the best one new grounds, the one liners arent so good but hey the rest is amazing, though i did like the first more i cant wait for the next
Try again guys.
Sorry guys, nothing personal, but I thought it was pretty horrid. I tried to be constructive in my criticism. Your series has potential, but there's some glaring flaws to be fixed first.
Animation: Good, but overdone. Like you said, there's limits to flash, and it was never really meant to be used to create fluid action sequences. Try adding less action and more story (see below).
sound: The sound quality was pretty bad. Choppy and weak. I know you did that to keep down the file size, but I'd suggest toning down the musical score instead (which was acually very nice).
Dialogue: Laughable. An endless stream of cliched one liners. I felt embarressed even having to watch it. I get that she's badass, point taken.
Acting: Not good, not bad. I didn't go for the whole emotionless thing. It came out just sounding kind of flat. I'd say let your actors play it how they want to.
Story: Cliched obviously, but well done none the less. The story flow had some problems, namely the spontaneous action scenes. They felt so forced, like you never meant for them to be there.