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Reviews for "Endowment"

Oh great song, wow, build is perfect and after 2 minutes it just gets great. I absolutely love that sax, Wow what a great sound.love the break at 4:30 haha! That classic Ectisity buildup and wow 5+ is just perfect. And that pitch shift!! Perfectly executed! Great job man!

Only thing I can say is that there is something a little off with those vocalized notes in the beginning, @:17 I'd try and get something more natural like a lalala. @ 2:19 I think it'd be so much more powerful to go for a la sound! In some parts it works well though, where the vocals are playing more of a supporting role.

Good Luck in the contest! I'm rooting for you!

EctiBot responds:

Thanks No-Stereo :D. The vocal library is called "aah" so sadly it doesn't have the extra "l" :(. I think it would have been a lot better if I had spent more time making the choir and vocals sound more realistic, but I'll work on that til next time :). Thanks for the review :D

5:25 OMG TEACH ME HOW TO DRUMS PLS

Man, this song took a bit of time to build up but how INSANE it got past the 5:00 mark was super worth it! And that sax-led key change was super sexy. After going back and listening to it a few times, it's much easier to see how the cinematic intro part melodically connected to the chiptuney latter part.

Damn, some might say that this combines too many different things to be coherent, but I honestly love it. You're quickly becoming one of my favorite favorite musicians! Keep up the good work!! :D

and one more great thing about that song is that chromatic transition thingy (electro toms?) that goes doop doop doop doop doop doop DOOP DOOP DOOP DOOP DOOP DOOP

EctiBot responds:

Nice, glad yoy liked it :D. The coherence is something I never really got a full grasp on in this XD, but I,m glad you enjoyed it regardless :).
That doop doop thing used to be my most overused buildup, as Lucid knows all about XD. Thought I'd dig it up again :).

Great I was waiting for this one! I know you were working hard on this one.

The build up is long, and somewhat slowly progressing like cinematic music does, but it makes it all worth it when you drop in that sick saxophone. Boy what a treat :).

Main critique is that the dynamics are hard to follow in this track, since you mixed the edmish with the cinematicish.

You got 2 different natural ways this track progress which don't mix together really well (I am not suggesting the genres wouldn't mix, I am suggesting their natural progression don't mix)
At the edm part you used the natural progression of EDM and at the cinematic parts you used the natural way cinematic music progresses.
But since EDM sounds more dominant than the cinematic, I feel you should have used the natural progression of EDM between 3:17 to 5:00, since you sped it up already at the part before, if this makes sense to you. The drop after might sound a bit underwhelming since it is not as much of a surprise it was at 2:30.

I might have been nitpicking here, since I do really enjoy this track and the flourishing melodies :), I am not a sucker for happy music, but this track grows on me nonetheless everytime I press play.

Good job on this one, I hope we will meet in the quarters!

EctiBot responds:

Thanks for the review and the feedback you gave in discord as well :).
What you're saying about the natural progession of EDM makes a lot of sense, and that's probably the biggest issue I had with this track. Really wish I had done something about it before the deadline. My goal was to make the track seamlessly transition between two very different styles, but that's something I still have to work a lot on. Thanks for the feedback :D!

Wow, this is quite a complex and polished song. There are small details to be found everywhere. This is a nice feat considering the length!

The atmosphere here is excellent. It becomes better as the song progresses, and there’s always something interesting going on in the background. Thanks to all the various effects, fx, and changing instrumentation, the song retains my interest for the entire duration.

So I like the orchestral elements of the track from a compositional perspective, but the sounddesign is lackluster. In particular, the percussion and violin sound muted and lifeless. I don’t necessarily expect vibrant instrumentation during a quieter part of the track, but I desire higher quality and more expression. The pads and other ambient sounds during these parts sound flat themselves, but they layer nicely.

I like the electronic sound design very much, except for some minor things here and there. For instance, the piano sounds slightly too bright.

Awesome transition around the 4:30 mark; that was brilliant execution!

I found the drops to be extremely underwhelming, especially considering the long wait times. I think one problem that arises with this kind of hybrid is that one may expect vastly different emotional expression and development from both genres, and that can make it difficult to sate one’s expectations after a genre shift. With that said, the drops as standalone music sound pretty good.

The arrangement is not bad per se, but for me, the lack of a satisfying drop detracts from the overall experience. I think the intro is solid; however, the ending, although well-executed, seems premature. I expected the song to return to its roots.

Despite all my negative thoughts, because of how complex this song is, it’s hard to have a negative impression of it. There are many minor yet likable elements that add up :)

EctiBot responds:

Thanks for the detailed review BO :). I read your review a long time ago and I was fully planning on revamping the track based on it, but I had to travel and time kinda slipped away from me. I think the drops are underwhelming is a bit too grand to be followed up by a
light happy buildup. Agreed with the orchesttal percussion. I really should have worked more on the mixing for them, but stuff like that always tend to go under my radar :/.
I'm planning on sticking with fusion music for a while because I really want to learn how to make a track combined of different genres still be coherent.
Thanks a lot for the feedback yet again:)