I love the story and animation is on point!!!
The voice acting needs a bit work with the tone
Although the random fucking at 4:04 was kinda weird, I guess it makes sense, less work
3:08 could've been done better with delivering that line
3:36 was perfect from seeing her dick go inside
6:21 was pretty hot seeing Jill look up
Facial at 7:48 needs some work
10:19 was kinda awkward how the big guy's punch went through the smaller one's
10:49 needed something like s "Meanwhile" caption so the transition doesn't feel so random
You should have a breath near 12:52 for Leon
Voice acting delivery also seems a bit monotone
You spelled scenery wrong in the description btw