Good animation, but why did you loop it for so two minutes.
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BoyPorcelain responds:
Because the original file was put on youtube, I may upload the infinite loop version as an 'art piece' but i just wanted to upload this version as is
The art style looks really distinctive, and the background's real well made! I really appreciate that picture of Barbatos in the background there. You can tell this chick's a real robot nerd, probably marathoned Pacific Rim loads of times! The lighting making the room all black and white before it goes back to normal is also a really cool visual.
If I had to name some flaws, I'd say that the sound could be better. The sparkly sound when the girl gets a eureka ends a little too abruptly before she starts doing the scientist laugh. Also, the gesture she does with her left hand when the loop restarts is odd. I think it'd be better if she tried to do that type of gesture with the robotic hand, before it starts sparking up and she has to repeat it again, getting way too ahead of herself. I'm no authority on what artists are allowed to do at all, though, just a suggestion!
I think this loop alone is a really intriguing premise, and I'd love to see it expand into something bigger. I could see that girl carting around her mecha plans all around town, trying to make a name for herself, or the total opposite, like a Dexter's Lab scenario. Either way, I'd love to see more!
BoyPorcelain responds:
Thank you, very well thought out review which i really respect. So first off thank you.
Again, thanks for the kind words, appreciate that, sound design i'll make sure to keep more in mind in future, i think my computer just starts to slow down too much when i edit sound on it so there were parts i had to skim over...
But the hand's starting point is fair, i wasn't thinking that far ahead when i animated this.
Glad you like it though, i might try and animate her again later this year, but that is what i have in mind for the character, quite literally a mixture of the two you said. A typical out of touch teenager dealing with her problems by creating giant mechs, trashing her problems and then dealing with her smashed problems.
Thanks for the review!
That's adorable and a really nice choice in background music. It might not fit as well if this was a full-length video or montage but it definitely fits well with a simple Loop.
BoyPorcelain responds:
Well i wasn't able to get round to showing, but it was going to be music playing off the radio in the front... But truth be told i just forgot about it..... Thanks for the review!
I love how dorky she is.
BoyPorcelain responds:
hahaha me too, thank you! :)
Amazing
So this was pretty amazing with some really building up of the end results looks like it could be a great robotic build in there, as for any changes dont feel it needs any this was a great film submission so please do make more like this or ad onto this.
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for any changes dont feel it needs any this was a great film submission
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