Nice to see some genuine attempts at horror in Madness. I feel like the jump scare at the end was too over the top though, something more subtle could have built better on the tension leading up to it.
Reviews for "The First Story"
Very original for a madness movie. I love it. Great artwork as well as artistic angles. Fantastic portrayal.
A Madness horror story hmm... this was new. :) The premise really reminds of Light's Out, but if this was based more on a memory from your childhood than that one movie I guess they borrowed a bit from you. You really built up the atmosphere too! And even though I was expecting that jump scare I wasn't expecting it when it really happened. Really nice work with the timing and build! Freaked out.
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Dude, stuff like this, and MADNESS:REIMAGINE kinda drives in the reason. Also, why are hospitals always so scary at night??
Just a weird question: why was I expecting the hot dog poster to be the actual jump scare?