Prelude is too long. And I would rather not be getting cucked for the first X number of scenes. Otherwise, it's okay.
Reviews for "Umichan Sentoryu"
Vortex00 responds:
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah the first few bits maybe not appeal to everyone but it kinda sets up the netori. Aside from Max, who is by design a dick, I envisioned it more like a guy who arrived in a new area where people are already conformable with their current sex life, so he needs to figure out how to get in on the action. Also if you assume Holly and Carl are related it might make more sense why she doesn't initially want to have sex with him.
The basic engine of the game is not explained, which basically means all the slow transitions make the game effectively unplayable. The "gameplay" in the early game is wandering around without purpose. Things which would make this more tolerable is the time system being more explicit, a calendar showing when certain events can be accomplished, a quest log/to-do list and/or the character literally saying what he should do next to the player.
I award one star for having standalone builds for most systems and the victory conditions explicitly listed in the walkthrough.
Vortex00 responds:
thanks for the feedback I'll plan to add something that can help players that might get lost for whatever reason. I will say that the characters in the game say where you need to go next. However if you skip or click through the dialogue fast you might miss it.
events can be accomplished in any order. once you get to free roam.
a to-do screen appears when you get objectives. early in the game the main character actually doesn't really have a defined he is working towards.
You play as the fat guy who's clearly a jerkwad? PASS... >_<;
Vortex00 responds:
so you don't play the game because bias and rate it zero. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯