I really do like how this links to Journey Home. But, perhaps there could be something different added into this, like maybe we can play the short quests the adventurer goes on. But otherwise, good work!!
Reviews for "Home"
It's not really a game? It's more like a visual novel with a few choices. I found it boring and predictable. But I liked the pixel art, so I wish you the best on your future work. :)
Just 2 decisions here so it can be called game, but nice work anyway
I liked this!
However, for a full game, it is a bit too short, and too "one-way" - as well in character development (Everyone is just becoming more and more happy) as well as in routes to take.
For example, rescuing the smiths daughter could have resulted in the mob storming your house and the alchemist getting killed. This way, you would - in a replay - hassle with yourself what to do, and try to find a route how you can save everyone.
Punching the thief could - 2 or 3 days later - let you find his dead remains on your way - or see him beeing executed on the marketplace - while letting him have the money could lead to a guard seeing you, whom from then you would have to bribe/convince/kill so he does not tell the Lord etc.
In other words, make it more difficult to find a "good ending" route ;)
Love the art, but it would have been nice if the game had multiple endings - I played the game several times so that I could try things like not talking to the guests in your house at all or choosing the opposite option, but it seems like these things made no significant difference to how the story unfolds at all.