Wow, where to start?
First of all, the artist, Emily, she's done an INCREDIBLE job capturing the artistry of the female form. Both the characters we've seen so far have been very different, and in both pieces she's used lighting spectacularly. The work feels realistic, and at the same time fits perfectly into the cartoon aesthetic, not succumbing to the unrealistic portrayals of women you see so often in these sorts of artworks. The girl's personality is captured so well in the art, too. This is probably the first example I can think of in an NSFW game where the art isn't just sexy drawings, but I would actually describe it as high-quality, professional art. It's honestly amazing to see so much talent from an artist who is just 20 years old. Seriously, I'm 22 and I can't claim to have anything close to that level in talent at anything other than writing nice things in reviews. I'd love to give my props to her personally, but I'm sure I'd come across as "creepy guy getting in contact about that nudie game I did,' so you'll have to pass my comments on for me, because she deserves every bit of praise for her work.
And I have to keep waxing lyrical. because the writing just absolutely oozes personality and character, even though we don't get that much of it. It's a masterclass in writing personality-filled, expositional dialogue. It's funny, charming, infatuating and gives a very clear representation of the characters and sticks to the tone of the game perfectly. It's adorably quirky and fun-filled, much like the rest of the game is.
As for things I think could be improved on, the game is already heading in the perfect direction. There isn't much more I can suggest other than "keep doing it," but for the sake of giving a few of my thoughts, I'd like to see more unique dialogue. I was enjoying it so much, I found myself going back to the girls on the 9th summon, just to see if they said something else. After all, I found the lack of sexual dialogue itself actually kind of strange, given that we're able to have recurring sex with these characters. I can understand them not wanting to hit on the player-character around Faye, but I'd love it if Phoebe would flirt with you around her, for example. I'd love if you go back to Ivy with only one summon less and instead of saying "summon me 1 more times" she says something like "summon me one more time, then come right back here and fuck me again." Perhaps Phoebe could have a line like "Summon me once more, and then let's REALLY have some fun!" Just some overt sexuality from them would make the sex scenes feel a lot more grounded in the story.
Other than that, I want more Phoebe. Honestly, I'm kind of becoming infatuated with her. I love her design and the glimpses of her character we get. I'm sure there will be a lot more, sexually and otherwise, with each of the girls by the final release, but a post-release Phoebe patch to let me take her out on a date wouldn't go amiss ;)
Seriously though, you guys are doing an amazing job. I don't usually play or get into these kinds of games, let alone write reviews on them, but I love the work you guys are doing and you deserve a lot of praise for it!