Selfdefiant's games are alright but if they've done a few, they can make some improvements.
We could do without:.
-the flashlight gimmick. If the room isn't dark, don't make it so when we turn on the flashlight. Also, things shouldn't magically appear when we shine light on it. Just make a dark room and a object placed in it to find.
-floating doorways. Make it part of the background.
-If you're going to put in so many locked doors, make the DOORS the colour of the key instead of making us try to remember text.
-the laugh that plays EVERYTIME we enter room M and the screaming ghost in room J.
You'd have to be a Catholic or something to know how to solve the cross puzzle.
That box in room M is WAAAAAY too easy to miss. A gray patch amongst a lot of gray patches.....
If you're going to include magic, tell us how to cast the spell.
Also, "flahlight"!