nice
Interesting how you did the storybook style, but I'm not into reading really long text at NG, if I wanted to, I would read a book. It's a good story, but you probably should've made it all in full animation. If you have to have text, then how about including an audio narration with it, by maybe yourself. Nice work, your art's good, this thing reminds me of a children's storybook.
Different
This is different then what I thought it was gonna be. I like the idea of a book, but i'm not a big reader. It wasn't that bad though but maybe next time add some music that would descibe the pages.
*sigh*
Nice Idea
I'm giving this one a high mark just because it's original. I haven't personally seen the idea to make a story book flash movie used yet... plus the graphics for the pages were very well designed. Nice job.
Good
I don't care what other people say. I thought this was VERY cute. Sure, Newgrounds might be ground zero to a bunch of swearing and sexual puns, but jeez, at least there are a few things with taste around here.
I liked the graphics, loved the story. You should submit it to a publisher.
Gay
This should not be here, newgrounds.com.
Please delete this shit. It's not what we want here. Try post it somewhere else, dude.