Reviews for Fables Wander : LK&P

[LauralRose]

I love folk tales from around the world, so thank you for sharing this one. I also really appreciated the comedic twists you added, periodically.

However, the English, while not unreadable, is rather poor, grammatically. I'd suggest having a native English speaker beta it for you—I'd be willing to help over PM if you'd like.

cooldudesgo responds:

thank you, you're too kind. XD..... and about the poor grammar, yea i guess it's really bad huh lol. as you can see i understand english, but not very good at speaking. i really appreciate the offer i will PM you as soon as i fix it. thank you for the feedback