Nice, but with problems.
Interesting movie, and very nice looking, too....however, it comes with many faults that prevent me from scoring this highly. Let me state, though, that this movie shows great potential.
The main problems here: it is too short, and it seems to be a bit high power, graphics-wise. Also add in the fact that I had a hard time getting into the movie, due to the lack of sound effects. I do not know if there is something you are doing that requires high amounts of resources, but if there is, that would explain the lag, and I recommend corrective measures.
In any case, this is very nice, especially grpahics-wise, but the rest of the mood was missing or lost, thanks to the sound and length of the movie. Very nice try, though.