I likes The Concept !
Reviews for "A Pretty Odd Bunny"
Loved the game :)
Gameplay here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YM4Tbb_lp6g&list=UUbebww06T4jNmtM_M93ecNA
Requires too much waiting, and it's not clear who sees you or what their sight range is.
I had some major issues with this game. First of all, the rules are unclear on which other bunnies you can be seen by or which you can or cannot touch. Second, I found it very faulty with several bugs ranging from skipping levels to platforms not working properly.
This a pretty decent puzzle platformer with an amusing concept. But there are some things that you need to work on to make the game play more enjoyable:
- The audio levels between music and sound effects need to be balanced; i turned my headset for
the music only to have my ears blasted by the "eating " sound effect
- as manuel9997 points out, the rules of what you can or can't touch needs to be clear, maybe at the
beginning of entire game. Case in point, when I went to play the bacon minigame in lvl7, I didn't
know I couldn't touch the carrots, which was then explained to me in lvl8.
- I found I had trouble jumping from short platforms that had something above them
I think if you focus on these points and what other users are saying (like you have been doing), your next game will be even better.
There's one more point I have to make that I take extremely seriously : be sure to credit properly were credit is due. I noticed you have music credits to the users who helped you make the tracks. However, the game play music for each level is the obviously from the Rayman 2 soundtrack. Even if the user who made the track claims it is a remix, you still need write that is in fact a remix to give credit to the original song. An easy way around this for next time is putting song names beside the user with ( ___ remix).
otrora responds:
Thanks a lot for your words. I appreciate it. Didn't know about the remix of Rayman. I took all the music from newgrounds users and the composer of that piece does not mention it is a remix. I am very careful with those issues and the intention always was to use free music and to proper credit the owner. If it happens to be from Rayman then I think I prefer to change it. Thank for letting me know.
UPDATE: Ok, did a quick check and in fact the song is inspired by Rayman music according to the author. I'm not sure if it is a rip off, but I decided to chage it anyway. The new track is Sneaky Score by 5vedjeland. Thanks again for calling my attention on this.