I liked the story and the ending. Nice one!
Reviews for "Monster Fruit"
I didn't really Expect too Much at First.....But as I got Further into the Animation, it just Kept getting Better and Increasing in Story Depth......While it May Not have been the Greatest Drawing, this can get you into your Feelings. It tells a Story About a Boy that goes to Search for Food for his People, but Turns into this Beautiful, Tell-tale Story. Stories Like these don't Need Jokes. They're Good Enough as they are.
I love finding shorts like this :D Its a great story and really looks as if it could have a sequal, wich it should :D *hint hint* XD
a full 5 stars for a great story :D
Very Powerful! Can't wait to see your future stuff. Nice to hear that you are learning as a creator, surely looks like you had much fun with the animation, impressive display of timing. Who did the music? Did you? I really like the final piece. Congrats!
SwedishPlumTrees responds:
Hey there. Thanks for the kind words! All of the music can be found on audiojungle.com.
Raptor Jesus... Is that you?
All joking aside, decently done in my opinion. Once you polish up some it could be even better. Keep working on the voice over/lip syncing of the character and try to keep it a little more fluid. It seemed like you were skipping around on ideas when you made certain parts. Like how the Raptor attack just kinda ended without much substance.
SwedishPlumTrees responds:
Hey there. Thanks for the critique. Yeah I was jumping around to different spots when making this, trying to make it all fit together, which I now realize leaves some spots hanging with no context. Next time I'll try to make a more concise plan. Thank you.