is really good the animation but the song dint like but good job dude making a real life animation well
kinda.
Reviews for "JOY (Part 1)"
BryanV responds:
Yeah, it wasn't really the best choice, but it was the best one I could find.
Was it worked on: 1/1
Music: 2/2
Animation: 2/3 could be better
Storyline: 2/4 could be way better.
Overall - 7/10
I was expecting something more, like... fot example
"Teenagers now, the protagonist meets the bullies with fully grown dog" scene
But it was neat animation, keep up the good work.
Good animation, the character seems a bit off though. Is he homeless? He seems like he's a street kid, so I feel like he should have been a little smarter and more aware of his surroundings than the bullies at first, instead of just trying to run away from them.
Great job though.
Nice animation and the uses of sound effects but.. somehow, the lust for money of the kid doesn't fit well at the inception of the animation..
As the thing get along, It can be seen that he is a homeless boy, maybe.. No friends or estrange? I don't know..
And the flashback... I guess you didn't need at all to repeat the first scene..
despite these critics, It was fun to waste those 7 minutes overall.. HAhahaah
Keep it up, buddy!
The animation was great, the story however wasn't too interesting.