That was pretty dark.
That was pretty dark.
I simply loved this! The poetry, the animation, everything. When I was in elementary school, my friends and I would always make stories up like this about the woods behind our school; luckily our teacher never shot us.
Nice to see this on NG Jacob!
Dude, that was great.
Your lyrical trappings had my fingers tapping, nerves near snapping, and eventually clapping. I enjoyed it, and wish more animated poetry found its way to NG.