So the mongoose helps the rabbits fight the snake, then bloody battle ensues, the land is ravaged by war and poverty...
LOL
Reviews for "Outcast Ninja: Book 2"
SlingBang responds:
Well, the soft wet pasture is certainly ravaged, but more in a peaceful, rich, enjoyable kind of way. ;)
Your art style is great for what it is. Plus you execute the subject matter very well. The only reason I gave you a 4/5 is because I feel like color would of made it stand out more.
SlingBang responds:
It would be fine even if you give it 3/5. There is no color or animation in this one so it shouldn't get top marks.
Sadly, I had to submit it with no animation or color due to time constraints and then the flash file getting corrupted and having to redo it from scratch... I might add in some color later on, but maybe I shouldn't even say that since I'm working every day for the next month at least...
pretty good story plot
its was a godd comic and all but its really messed up about the guy and his daughter.
SlingBang responds:
Aaaah, but is it messed up or is it a culturally contrived viewpoint rooted in the justifiable fear of congenital birth defects. Perhaps, the future storyline will reveal they are actually not biologically related... Then would it be OK?
Or, perhaps the offense derives from the perception of abusive power dynamics in a father-daughter relationship. But doesn't love override moral objections? In this case isn't it evident that their love is reciprocal and honest?
Or, perhaps I'm just joking and it's a comic and he's the bad guy so the goal is to make him offensive and entice the readers to dislike him and really want him to die in the end...
I guess you'll have to see how the story develops when the next book comes out... maybe by December?
what did all the chinese say?
SlingBang responds:
Here's a rough translation for you to read along with the comic.
Page 5:
I'm happy to see you have returned "Little Bird".
Thank you politely, Master. I really missed your cock.
Page 6:
You really suck cock well. I'm cumming so quickly!
Aaah, Delicious!
OK. Now, you must be wanting to take a bath. Right?
Excuse me, I have your towels.
OK, come in.
Page 9:
This is your mistake, for I am "The Great Fire Dragon"!
Hey old man, I'm "The Sharp Knife"!
Page 10:
Master!
Be careful "Little Bird"! There are 5 enemies in here.
Page 11:
Master, help me!
Aargh!
Page 12:
Now, I'm gonna kill you, old man!
I am "The Fire Dragon"...
Ha ha ha...
Fire Dragon Attack!