pretty good story plot
Reviews for "Outcast Ninja: Book 2"
The boy with the towels was a minor?!
SlingBang responds:
Hahahaha. Thanks for the comment and the stars.
I found it funny bc either my art is so bad I can't even draw recognizable ages or you are pointing out the stupidity of setting 'ages' on drawn characters.
If it the the former, I promise my artwork will get better...
If it is the latter, I agree with you. Unfortunately, the wording of the rules state: any drawing that "appears' to be under the age of 18 is not allowed. 'Appearance' is a subjective measurement so cannot be practically applied to artwork.
In reality 'age limits' are set by the accepted mental capacity of an average individual to deal with the societal consequences of their actions, but in art this is irrelevant as there is no real person taking action. There is only an observer and the effect on them is determined by their interpretion of the message they receive.
The Heroine and Star are portrayed as being sexually aware, hence more likely to be perceived as adults in the mind of an intelligent observer. The boy was portrayed as being sexually unaware and in a subordinate position to the sexual aggressor so more likely to be perceived as a minor.
Sorry for rambling. I tried my best to be concise. :)
This is very good. I really apreciate this have a good story, a good art, i really enjoyed your comic.
SlingBang responds:
I'm glad you liked the story and the art. It motivates me to keep working on the future books!
Be sure to check out Outcast Ninja Book #1 as well. I just updated it with 4 more pages added to the original story.
oh shit i've been waiting for this for like a year now since i saw the 1st book o:
it was amazing ! not as much gore as the 1st one but still awesome ^^
pretty fun and interesting things happen , totally loved it !
i hope we're gonna see a 3rd one , right ?
SlingBang responds:
Yes, Book # 3 and #4 are finished. The entire story arc will be hypothetically finished in book #6. Originally, I had intended to space the release of each book 3~6 months apart so I would have time to draw #5 and #6... Tentatively, I will submit another game next and then Book #3.
There is certainly more gore, deviant sex, and interesting events in the upcoming books as well. Generally, it only diminishes when I need to add in some storyline. haha :P
Your art style is great for what it is. Plus you execute the subject matter very well. The only reason I gave you a 4/5 is because I feel like color would of made it stand out more.
SlingBang responds:
It would be fine even if you give it 3/5. There is no color or animation in this one so it shouldn't get top marks.
Sadly, I had to submit it with no animation or color due to time constraints and then the flash file getting corrupted and having to redo it from scratch... I might add in some color later on, but maybe I shouldn't even say that since I'm working every day for the next month at least...